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All Comments on 'Influenza'

by Ashson

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 4 years ago

For a double rape story, it was damn good. I always love your last lines. 5*

StrappingManStrappingManalmost 4 years ago
Good for short story

But our protagonists dialogue needs work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Not your best but not your worse

Tired of the coaches stories and this one was a lackluster one at best sorry. Love your other work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Rough Dialogue

Who talks like this?

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