All Comments on 'Initiation'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Adventure...

I hope there are more adventures at club Adventure.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
FIRST RATE BEGINNING

WHAT A JOY TO READ SUCH A WELL WRITTEN EROTIC TALE. I DO HOPE THAT THIS IS MERELY THE BEGINNING OF MANY MORE

EPISODES

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanabout 19 years ago
Extaordinarily implausible

As a flight of fancy, lots of fun. As a plausible story? Well, no. But that's okay. Some paragraphs are a bit long but otherwise, a well written fantasy.

SN

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