All Comments on 'Inner Woman Ch. 01: Charmed by a Bracelet'

Wonderful story. I can see a more comedic story with Benny 'accidently' putting the bracelet on and having to experience the misogynistic ogling he was giving to Mikayla. So many possibilities for something like a magic bracelet. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

PS. As for the length of your stories, I was listening to a Masters class by George R. R. Martin the other day, and he uses an organic, 'gardener' method of writing, letting the story grow and develop as he writes. I like the analogy of a story as a garden, and honestly, I get more people asking me to write novels than I do telling me my stories are too long. Write what your heart tells you to write. Listen to your characters, it's their story after all.

Love your work. Keep it up.

Great story! Your writing is very good

Your story was just amazing ! I loved every moment hoping that Mikayla would have her desires fulfilled. I was right there with her in mind and body through every moment. I have now completed my transition physically to help release my inner woman. I have found my special guy and he is clearly my soul mate. Of course I would have loved to have such a bracelet and have dreamed of the result all if my life.

Any chance we get to read about a wedding?!? And then pregnancy and motherhood? I can imagine plenty of sex with the super charged libido from pregnancy. Also maybe sneaking in a quickie when the little tike is down for nap! Wonderful story!

I love the story! So many possible ways for part 2,3,4...

"cure" trouble making kids or build a secret sisterhood helping trans guys. You name it.

Omg! I love this! I want my very own Cole to reinforce my womanhood 🥰

love love love!

Brilliant, loving and transformational, thank you!

Well done!

This should be made into a movie! I loved every second of reading it. I found myself immersed in it as Mikayla. Can’t wait for the next chapter to Cole and her’s story!

What a great story, where is that bracelet

Everyone needs a little magic once in a while. I am a sucker for a happy ending. Luv Chloe

Very well written with great character development. Thank you for sharing your gift for writing with all of us. It really is a curse by the way, I couldn't agree with that more.

Sabrina

Your stories are never

too long, if anything they are too short, as they always leave me wanting more

Excellent, sophisticated, loving. Maybe could get a bit naughtier? ;o)

Very well done I like the inner- woman voice came to guide him. to bring out his true-self in the end. I have some experience with what is called two spirit person. So I can relate to the character. I also find it Interring and Excellently written. I hope there is a squeal to it. Thank you very much for writing this LOVE STORY.

Fabulous, very well written. (And just the right length, you could not have done it justice if you had shortened it any.) I would have been fine with it being longer as she explored more of what her new life had in store for her.

This story was very well written, and It really spoke to me. As a trans women in the middle of transitioning, I really identified with Mikayla. I just wish my best friend would take me the way Cole did Mikayla!

Delightful. My first exposure to your writing. I'm following you now. 5

Utterly delightful story to read and luv myself from start to finish, thank you kindly for sharing your craft with us all. Such a joy to read xxx

I loved this story as the same for the other firsts . The problem I find is once Michel puts on the bracelet and at home he goes to bed a man then wakes the next morning a woman. This is where my problem begins, everything in his life has changed right down to having everything changed for a woman with no signs of there ever being a man who previously lived there.

Love your story excellent looking forward to next part right now peace

Oh snap! I've got next! Slap that bracelet on me girl! I loved this. Being such a romantic, my eyes watered as each professed their loved. Great story and very well written.🥰💞💞

A beautiful love story that was so sweet that it brought tears to my eyes.

This story was a graber from the start.

just from the name we know the situation that will come to be, we just do not know the whole story.

This author does a great job of making events so realistic.

I did not have such a bracelet in my life, but I did experience life living as a female for little over ten years.

Reading this brought up so many memories.

My thanks to the author for the story.

Great Work Girl !

I really enjoyed the story. It flows nicely. I don’t really know why, but I’m kind of addicted to these transformation type erotic stories. I see that there’s two more chapters, so I’m looking forward to reading them next. Cole sounds pretty dreamy I have to say! Lol thank you for writing it! xo

That a beautiful story. In the beginning I was sure Michael would revert back to a man. As the story went on I was so glad he didn't. My only criticism is that it wasn't ten pages longer, Wonderfully done!!!

Loved it. Thank you

I wish I could find a bracelet like that. What an awesome experience that would be.

😀 Wow! Loved it!

it would be nice if this bracelet really existed

Great story, well written and great to see them finally getting their desired outcome.