All Comments on 'Innocent Sin Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More please

Great story! Maybe she can be his sultry mistress!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
so he's cheating on his wife, no doubt does it regularly

Whining about what he does for her and having sex with the pastor's daughter in a way that will get her to reject him when she finds out. Fucking dumb plot, stick to vignettes not multi chapter nonsense

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Ideas

She has to get pregnant and he marries her and finds religion.... ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Amazing Grace!

I'm in love with this sweet young thing! I need more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love it! Chapter 3 P L E A S E

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