Inseparable Pt. 04

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"Yeah, thanks, likewise," he said to be polite, though he barely looked at her.

"Did you come here with anyone?"

"Yeah. Killian."

Sarah rolled her heavily lined eyes. "Anyone other than your friend."

"No," he said shortly, not knowing what else he could really say. "I'm gonna go get a drink. Later," he excused himself as quickly as he could. He didn't go get another drink. He made a beeline for Killian, which he realized was probably blatantly obvious, but he didn't really care.

"Never seen you play such a terrible game of pong," said Killian when he joined her. Both Adam and the other girl were gone.

"I was distracted."

"Oh?"

"Yeah, couldn't decide if I wanted to tell Adam to fuck off for having dumped you, or give him a high-five for being the catalyst of you sucking my dick."

"Very funny," she rolled her eyes.

"Bet he regrets it now."

Killian shrugged. "Angela took one for the team and decided to talk to him somewhere more private. Think she had a crush on him anyway."

"Jack," he heard someone speak his name. "Um, excuse me," she cleared her throat.

"Yeah?" Jack turned and looked at her blankly at Gina, who was the cause of the interruption.

"Did you get my texts?" she asked expectantly.

Jack had felt his phone buzz several times but hadn't pulled it out. "Haven't checked my phone. Sorry."

"Haven't checked it for two days?"

"Oh, sorry," he said. He'd honestly forgotten to reply to the message he'd gotten from her the other day. He had been thoroughly preoccupied with thoughts of Killian, and Killian based activities. He didn't even remember if he'd read her message or not. "So, uh, what's up?"

"I mean, you said you wanted to hang out tonight, didn't you?"

Shit. He had said that. In passing. At least a month before. "Plans changed. Sorry I didn't hit you up sooner."

"Oh?" Gina raised your eyebrow and looked around, as though expecting to see another girl besides Killian.

"Sorry," said Jack, not quite sure what else he could say. "Hanging out with Killian tonight."

She gazed at him coolly, flipped her hair, and muttered, "Whatever," as she stalked off.

"I'm sorry, babe," Jack apologized to Killian. He was starting to wonder why he thought going to the party was such a great idea.

"Didn't realize you'd made plans to meet up with anyone tonight," said Killian, sounding a little taken aback.

"I forgot," he sighed. "I didn't even realize she still thought that. I mentioned it in passing after we--it was a while ago."

"I already know you fucked her, Jack. You can say it. I won't be mad." Killian folded her arms. "I just didn't know you had continuing interest."

"I obviously don't. I honestly forgot I even said that. Assumed she did too."

"Clearly, she did not."

"I'm sorry, Kil, I feel bad that you have to deal with this," sighed Jack. "With them."

"What? With every girl you fucked? Nothing new about that."

"It's different now. You don't have to pretend it's not."

"You're still the same Jack. And I'm still the same Killian. It's not that different."

"Bullshit."

"I'm not saying it isn't different for us," said Killian. "But it's not different for everyone else since no one thinks we are together."

"Oh, fuck this." He couldn't stand it anymore. He pulled Killian to him and kissed her.

"Jack," she looked up at him, shocked, "what are you doing?"

"I'm fucking tired of this. You're mine."

His lips met hers again and she wound her arms around his neck. Despite what Killian had said about wanting to keep it secret, he could feel her smiling. He was vaguely aware of a couple hoots and gasps from people around them, but he couldn't be bothered to look.

Her lips parted against his as he probed gently with his tongue. He kissed her deeply. Passionately.

She was his and it was time everyone here knew it.

***

Author's note: Thanks to everyone who made it to this point! The story isn't over, but due to the evolving nature and themes, I've chosen to split the next part into a separate series. I understand many readers who found this in the "First Time" category may not be interested in where this is headed. To those of you who choose to end the story here, I thank you for reading and hope you enjoyed it! To those who want to follow the journey of these characters as they explore some of their darker interests, be sure to check out Insatiable, which I'll start posting in about a week.

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11 Comments
BlueBranBlueBran14 days ago

Loved the romance aspect of it. Again, the entire thing was a train wreck. I’m not saying that in a bad way. It was pure chaos, and it had me glued. I’d love to keep reading, but the next series is in the BDSM category, which I don’t do, so I’ll be tapping out here. I’ll just imagine Jack and Kil live happily ever after with a normal healthy sex life and a whole lotta love!

DrizdartDrizdartabout 2 months ago

Enjoyable arc ...

After a break, perhaps you can provide a short epilog of Jack & Killian on vacation with the parents ....

From personal experience, going from a "study buddy" to "friend" to "we had a fight" to "we're engaged" without letting parents have much of a clue makes for a good story.

hedo519hedo519over 1 year ago

Great story. For those that think that 18 year olds can’t have a sub/dom relationship, you are wrong. I have seen several relationships like this Not heard about or read it online but personally knew them. To believe you have to be a certain age to be Dominant or submissive is stupid. If society wasn’t bringing up males to be neutered, weak, pseudo men you would see this is the way men have always been. It is nature. Almost every mammal has a dominant partner and a submissive partner. That does not turn on at 21 or 30 or whatever. IMHO.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 1 year ago

Killian has a choice in this...she knows Jack is a man-slut; always has, always will (know his history...)

The dom/sub 'issue' some of you have...why can two 'young people' not have that kind of relationship?? Do you REALLY think their youth and inexperience preclude that kind of behavior from them?? And, in the world we live in now??

Guys are not "men" today...they are little boys who have been indulged by society, taught NO RESPECT for women, even with all the exposure to 'sensitivity training' mandated by the so-called veducation system"...WHAT A JOKE THAT IS!!

This author has written a STORY, y'all...nothing more, nothing less...read it as such, leave the comments out...OR BE ON THE RECEIVING END OF A DESPONSE LIKE THIS ONE!!

FIVE**5**STARS...because the story has lined out, to the point that Jack actually shows his 'intentions' toward Killian in public; good for both of them, and looking forward to the next series about them!!

krazicat99krazicat99over 1 year ago

Early on the story was great, but for teens to develop a sub/Dom relationship is a bit too far fetched. Could have ended it much sooner 2ithout brother involvement and that character being someone other than a relative and them just finding each other. Story became juvenile and then crashed and burned IMO

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