All Comments on 'Inside His World'

As I said in the comment on the other story, I don't normally do Sci-Fi & Fantasy Lit stories [disappointed too often when I tried them early on], but as with your other story, "Sweeter than a Summer's Dream", you sure packed a lot of story into one page, and hit every bell. Will there be a chapter 2 [or more] for this one?

I was just going to skim the story to see if I even liked it, but I had to finish!

I would like to hear more this can go so many directions anyone in kansas city wanna review this lets talk

Left unfulfilled, in a state of arousal and in need of more of this storyline!

i love the writing so much can i have your number? x

Interesting! Can't wait to see more!

I would be curious to read more!! what kind of creatures are they?