All Comments on 'Instant Attraction Ch. 02'

2 words - After care?

Is there a new literary style emphasizing extremely short paragraphs? This is the second story I’ve read in two days where the most of the paragraphs were less than two sentences, some of them less than one complete sentence. I find it very distracting to the point that I cannot finish the story.

Am sorry, not sure why but when published the format is altered from what I prepared, trying to sort. Sorry