All Comments on 'Instructions for Her (Audio)'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This was amazing. You should do more.. Whoever has you telling them what to do regularly is very lucky :)

marquis_omarquis_oover 3 years agoAuthor

Sadly my partner isn't really into the whole scene ¯\_( ツ)_/¯. But it's nice to think someone is enjoying them. Any suggestions for scenarios welcomed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Didn't like the automated voice to begin with but got into it. Kept the dynamic distant. Believable that this is a long distance scene. Very descriptive with commands. Thank you, Sir.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Did NOT like weird audio voice. Couldn't listen which is too bad, thought it would be interesting

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Living away from the UK for many years now. Have only recently started writing fiction, always interested in feedback and constructive criticism.

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