by Nicole99
This is just sick. It shouldn't be in the interracial category, but in the incest category. Has very little to do with race and a lot to do with screwing your own family. Just put it in the right category and spare those of us who are not into screwing our own parents.
Stylewise, well written. For believability, not very good. Since you are from Australia the term "knickers" is understandable. But if you are trying to do a story set in the U.S., no one here would ever use the term unless they were a immigrant.
It's rather erotic for a totally unbelievable story. I age you a 25 for imagining impossible things.
I loved your story. It made me hard as a rock. It was very meticulously written I felt every emotion and desire in your words. Thank you!
Wow! I sure didn't see THAT coming. I, too, caught the knickers reference. Understandable (you gotta go with what you know). I also agree that a next part would be resolving her real parentage. This actually was a feel-good on a couple of levels. Its got a couple of avenues with potential. Please continue!