All Comments on 'Interracial Chatroom Surprise Ch. 03'

Wow! I sure didn't see THAT coming. I, too, caught the knickers reference. Understandable (you gotta go with what you know). I also agree that a next part would be resolving her real parentage. This actually was a feel-good on a couple of levels. Its got a couple of avenues with potential. Please continue!

With all of the twist and turns you have made a beautiful story.

I loved your story. It made me hard as a rock. It was very meticulously written I felt every emotion and desire in your words. Thank you!

HER TURN TO FIND HER BIOLOGICAL FAMILY WITH ANOTHER TWIST

"Nobody loves you like family..."

It's rather erotic for a totally unbelievable story. I age you a 25 for imagining impossible things.

Stylewise, well written. For believability, not very good. Since you are from Australia the term "knickers" is understandable. But if you are trying to do a story set in the U.S., no one here would ever use the term unless they were a immigrant.

This is just sick. It shouldn't be in the interracial category, but in the incest category. Has very little to do with race and a lot to do with screwing your own family. Just put it in the right category and spare those of us who are not into screwing our own parents.