by parawa
don't you.
I love your story telling skills
Please continue....
I loved the O series and each chapter drew me in....and here we are again....you have drawn me to you and your writting style.
Continue, continue, continue!
your story is wonderful. I loved 'O' and can't wait for you to pour out more and more amazing stories; including this one.
I love the POV and voice. From the start this has been arousing, thoughtful and just romantic enough without being sugary. Brava.
It is shameful the way Lit drops so many stories at once, pushing so many wonderful things into the abyss before they can be seen. I hope many will discover this story.
Sorry???? I read then reread the start of this story about three times, but still do not know why she was thrashed with his belt? What the hell did she do to deserve that?
I don't think she had to "do anything wrong" to be thrashed ....he was testing her responses to lots of things ...and clearly she enjoyed it ! Great writing as usual ...sad that I have to really search for theses little gems on this site .