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All Comments on 'Invisible Girl - An Erotic Romance Pt. 03'

by zenmackie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It´s some very fine BDSM. I particulary like that they shift their power dynamic every so often. It comes over so naturally.

Awesome!

dogged1dogged1over 1 year ago

I had been reading "Invisible Girl" on sexstories.com, forgetting that you also post here on Literotica. I have to think, based on the reviews on both sites, that Literotica is a more suitable audience. I am loving your story: it captures the innocence of the virgin couple, even amid their bent for kinky sex. Their romantic self-discovery is done with appropriate tenderness, and the background story, particularly Jane's family life, supports the main story.

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