All Comments on 'Invitation'

by wajawhiii

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OvercriticalOvercriticalalmost 2 years ago

Very mechanical and not really titillating.

AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

Story was interesting. Not the best that i have read, but far from the worst. I can't put my finger on (or in it. Lol.) that would make it more exciting. Good try.

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