All Comments on 'Invitation'

Loved it. Very fun read. 5stars

Nice work if you can get it and you can get it if you try!

5

Very enjoyable.

I thought of My pet & how we would enjoy an experience like this.

Laugh out loud stupid.

There seemed to be a hint that if Jane hadn't been so engrossed in her activities with Michael that she would have noticed something going on with Jimmy that maybe wasn't what she would have liked or preferred.

Maybe I took that the wrong way but, it seemed like a subplot that was thrown in and then abandoned.

sexual procurement by a rich dick.

Didn't end the way I expected from this author. I would have expected Michael to have completely stolen Jane away and Jimmy being reduced to living in a cardboard box for pimping his wife.

Not one of JTP's better works.

She's simply a prostitute. No gold plating can change that. But, who cares? D

I agree with Miket0422,

That subplot was abandoned pretty licketty split! But I liked it that a modern fairy tale stayed that way rather than become a gothic nightmare. As Willy Wonka said to Charlie, “Do you know what happened to the man who got everything he ever wanted?”

“He lived happily ever after…”

It is a great premise nicely stated with lots of play in the invitation and website description language for really horrific outcomes as well. So, I like happy endings :). I am certain that submissions based on your premise could generate a lovely cottage industry of “Caveat Emptor” alternatives! Thank you

Now there’s a happy ending, kinda like a Disney flick but one where mom and dad fuck the neighbours …. Haa haa

I like the premise of the story, but disappointed that there was no erotic description of their sexual activity. Did she orgasm? How did it feel? What about Jimmy when he blew his load into the actress? So, they joined the club and had sex. Duh.

Totally unbelievable....then again everything here in Literotica world is. In the real world, no husband in his right mind would allow his wife to be whored out...

Sadly, no stars for this...unless there is a revision with a different point of view.

DOL

Yep, it was just a matter of time before Jimmy went down cucky boy road. Obviously he'll set up permanent residence there....

Nothing really happened. We opened our marriage for financial gain, no negative consequences ever occurred, the end...

As a complete fantasy and total departure from any reality it was ok, however, the part about children poisoned it for me, even as a complete fantasy I can not imagine anyone who would except what would be a forced raising of someone else’s children then the last part about the ongoing affair outside of the club between the wife and sponsor seams to cross over into cheating and the “ perks “ make the wife a whore as she was the target

Two narcissistic fucked up characters. Personally I would rather be poor than sell my body and soul to a group of fucked up swingers and cuck makers.

Nope, marriage would never survive when you trade trust, fidelity and commitment for cheap sex and money. Looks like kids will turn out to be rich but shallow idiots like mom and dad.

Hi. This is a re-posting. I read this some years ago and have a very good memory. Either that or it is an extremely close likeness! Ha. Anyway, getting over the rather implausible financial benefits bestowed on new members, it is a tad ironical that Jane is a Book editor when there are dozens and dozens of word errors in this story. A better editor would be welcomed.

While the basic premise is believable (I've visited a few "strange" sex clubs in my early years!) some details eg signing a contract that prevents them from abortion if the woman gets pregnant, is a difficult ask. Does that mean she has to take a Plan B pill after every Club meet?

Plus, the on-going affair being promoted is outside most normal Club requirements. So, a permanent "Cuck" position for the husband! No, the details had not been thought through. Interesting though. Cheers.

Kind of blah as written. Jane gets sex at the club and now at work while Michael only gets it at the club IF ASKED. As for the two kids, they make it vague as to who is the sperm donor. Do they know? They don't sound like they care.

not worth reading

Stupid doesn’t begin to describe this pile of debris 😎

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2 **

Life is in no way similar to this story.

2 star story. At best.

She must be quite the whore for Jimmy to get that much in exchange for her services. Forget reclaiming her. Start looking for more Johns willing to pay that much, keep pimping her out, and upgrade to a younger model wife you don't have to share.

Prostitution

So they are just whores

My goodness, the commenting mob is more harsh than I anticipated.

I didn't think the story was so bad, though far fetched. So what? It's a story.

Though I would recommend an editor for grammar and the like.

What utter hubris.

No affair and no cheating? Fix the tags

Jimmy never had to take it up the ass from a male gold member. Hard to believe that there were no bi-curious

male members-interesting-maybe they were weeded out of the club before they reached gold members????

Might have made for a more exciting story line, many directions it may have travelled.

Dare

Pretty good writer, doing their spin on a junior high school boy's idea for what might happen. I mean, if we can believe Ian Fleming, then why not this guy, right?

God another awfull story by this author

What oldguy1 Said.

Felt like just another backup in the main baths toliet. This writer is fairly consistent with his themes. Wife always becomes someone else’s slut and hubby foolishly becomes another wimp and simp (Cuck). Not sure wife’s worth gold for spreading her legs but I guess she was just a whore after all.

I like the start and the middle of the story, but it ended way too soon it could have been a really good story with going into the plot and characters a little more and going through the years and more of each of their time at the club.

Good concept .. needed more sex n description of Jane fucking more .. and how Michael uses her

Who's kids? Not my cup of tea but was an easy read. No score, won't bring it down.

Sounds like going down to the crossroads.

Na total bullshit.

Not even close to one of your best efforts. It's pure bullshit.

Uh, I think the plot of this story is that prostitution can pay, if its managed properly. There is that pussy that comes with love and romance, and there is that pussy that gets bought. These sex partners were bought. Fine by me, but where's the suspense or drama? They came, they fucked, they were paid. Happens all the time, every day, big fuckin' deal. What was the point?

You do know these invitations exist in the real world, don't you? They usually end with the couple victimizing minors on Epstein's island, or worse, in some sex orgy cannibal feast at a billionaire's estate with oh so refined European royalty eating little girls raw. So, the premise of your story made me nauseous.

Very imaginative, although without much in the way of any conflict.

I wonder how Jimmy got around ChatGPT's guardrails?

The premise is good, as is the couple’s enjoyment of everything the Club offers, but it would have been a far more interesting story if it turns out there were a catch, i.e., some conflict had developed which required growth and change in both of them, demanding an unexpected resolution. In other words, they should have had to pay a price, indeed a high price, emotional or sexual, for what they were being given. A decent story, though, but I rather expected more.

Lol. Listen to all the incels going off totally jealous that they aren't getting any.🤣

It might have been interesting if either Jane or Jimmy had decided after they arrived at the club that they wanted to leave and then what ensued afterwards. As is, this is just the silly fantasy of an 30 yo incel living in his mom's basement. Harmless, but silly.

Complete waste of my time reading that .

Nah!

Didn’t engage with the story at all.

A tale about a hooker wife and a stupid husband

2/5

Meh. Two stars. 'nuff said. Actually, a bit of a time waster, even with some skimming through the sex.

JPB

We’ll originally it sounded like a swapping, sharing storyline but with the wife continuing a long term affair whether with husbands approval or not it became another ‘cuc’ & ‘slut wife’

She had a long term affair while the husband had ‘experiences’ when they visited the club. I presume the wife also had ‘experiences’ at the club (or did she remain’faithful’ to her lover?)

So wife has a husband and lover full time plus ‘experiences’ at the club while husband has half a wife and ‘experiences’ at the club.

So, just a modern woman’s feminist dream, two men full time and screwing around.,They have kids but we don’t know ‘who’ has those kids or more specifically ‘who’ fathered them.

Cucking by stealth rather than by force….

well written

@LenardSpencer

RE: Hi. This is a re-posting. I read this some years ago and have a very good memory. -

Do you remember the name of the story?

Yeah, count it to the drawer of lost time and brain cells.

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While I'm not sure I could accept the lifestyle in this story in my own life, it WAS well-written and worth the 5 stars I gave it.

Just a few typos which were probably from auto-correct, like 'and' instead of 'an', but again they didn't detract from the story. (It happens to all of us !)

Sometimes we all dream of "what if..." but I just don't think I could accept an open marriage myself. I do NOT judge those who do...

...I don't believe it's my business what others choose to do, but it's fun reading stories like this one.

My thinking on this story: I try to put different scenarios in stories, in this I wanted to see how readers would react to something almost entirely without a hint of cheating or any other conflict, in essence a story with an unlikely but just about believable plot were nobody is damaged, everyone effectively a winner.

Result: As always likes and hates, I just love the comments as always.

The good news - nobody died in the making of this story, thank you for taking the time to read it , even if you hated it.

well written story, didnt like the premise. this couple was obviously open to outside the marriage sex which to me indicates no real, deep love, or affection for the other. Sort of an arranged marriage which was saved by the offer from the club to let them "cheat" with the permission of the other. My guess is that w/o out the sanctioned cheating, the marriage wld not have lasted 20 yrs, usually wldnt last that long even w/ the allowed cheating. 2*s for the premise of the story, altho it was well written, no way to score for content vs writing. rk