Irdu-Lili Pt. 07: End of All Flesh

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Nimeth looked up, awe and jealousy on her fey features, "Her? Mother I am better for..." Nimeth moaned as her body awashed with fresh lust, disproving her own boast.

"My sons hunger, serve them well Nimeth."

Nimeth groaned as her body reached the cusp of orgasm, and remained locked there, trapping her on the verge of release but never reaching it. Nimeth reached down and masturbated furiously, "Yes, at last. Take me there, please."

Levant watched it all in horror, then the lights went out. For a split second he heard a terrifying sound emitted from thousands of inhumane throats, before the lights went back on again. Nimeth was gone, leaving only Kilili standing now. Levant sighed in relief when he saw her eyes back to their usual colour. "What was that? What are you?"

Kilili stood there motionless for a moment, then walked forwards. "I hear there is a concert on later." As though it were nothing Kilili pulled the first spike out, "The orchestra is going to play Scriabin's Mysterium, Prefatory Action." Levant grunted as another pin came out, he sighed as his tendons knitted together and he could move his arm again. Kilili continued on, "We should go, I know you'll love it. Did you know it is unfinished? He died beforehand. He claimed it would be a piece that would bring about the end of the world. It is so haunting, so vivid. So..."

As Kilili pulled out the last stake Levant fell forwards and embraced her tightly. Shocked, but also delighted, Kilili returned the embrace. For a long time they held one another. Levant whispered into her ear, "Nimeth told me many things. I thought you were gone for good, stuck in that world."

"I was, to Ardat-Lili it is the ultimate destination, the peak of sexual excess. To me though, it was....meh."

Levant could not help but laugh, "A world of eternal rape and torture and you found it "meh"?"

Kilili grinned and shrugged, "What can I say, rape and torture is boring. Scriabin on the other hand," She kissed Levant and pulled him after her, "Come on we can still make it!"

******

Hand in hand they walked toward the concert hall.

They were silent for most of the walk, just happy to be together again. Kilili had made a start on explaining her ideals better, but realised that perhaps Esther would do a better job later. Kilili was certain Esther was well on the way to becoming Ardat-Lili, having one from this era would prove useful.

"Kilili?" Levant suddenly spoke.

"Mmm?"

"You were called the End of All Flesh. That you are now a Lilitu. What does that mean? What does our mother want with all this semen exactly?"

"Ooh, there it is, we can just make it. Don't fret about tickets, our charms will get us in." Levant sighed as Kilili began running, pulling Levant after her again.

He sighed, he may be immortal, but every moment still perishes. He decided that for tonight at least, he would lay the questions to one side and cherish every fleeting moment with her.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
oof 100

Don't you just hate it when you're clapping them cheeks and suddenly she speaks in demon tongue and summons a portal into Rape Hell? Should have had Geico Insurance smh.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Summary of Irdu-Lili Series

Part 1: Man meets thot

Part 2: Man becomes thot

Part 3: Thot teaches manthot

Part 4: Manthot and thot meets Uberthot

Part 5: Man activates "Begone Thot"... He hurt himself in his confusion!

Part 6: Revenge of the Thot

Part 7: Return of the Thot: Electric Semen Boogaloo

EugeneSelfishEugeneSelfishalmost 5 years ago
Critique: The reverence of ignorance

I felt frustrated, throughout the whole series, as Levant asks many straightforward and good questions, only to be passive-aggressively ignored by Kilili, who always changes the subject to something banal (even at the very end of the final chapter). In some places, Kilili even seems to preach that it's better to remain ignorant of the answer to a question than to know the answer. To me, this is a fundamental character flaw that makes it very difficult to identify with Kilili.

In fact, much of the plot hinges precariously on this character flaw, this reverence of ignorance. Had she simply answered some of Levant's questions earlier on in the series, there would have been no reason for him to leave her. It seems so out of place that it makes the plot seem contrived in order to hold of 'the big reveal' until the very end of the story, when there doesn't seem to be a natural reason to do so except for that character flaw. It's like a lynch pin; without it, the story falls apart, at least in my opinion. I think the story could have evolved more naturally without this plot/character contrivance.

That being said, I did enjoy the series quite a bit overall. Aside from that one major critique, it was a really good story, and worth the read.

LilithHeraldLilithHeraldover 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks all, defo work on a continuation. Time permitting.

@Frivolous. Can't say I know Mage: Ascension, but will check it out!

FrivolousFrivolousover 5 years ago
Mage player?

Lots of things in this serial remind me a lot of Mage: the Ascension. I wouldn't be surprised if the author LilithHerald is a player.

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