All Comments on 'Iris's Fiancés Ch. 05'

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BravoJamez over 4 years ago

Nice

I enjoy your stories with Iris and Caitlyn and now with Barry in the mix. You have a Domme, a sub and a switch but it would be interesting if you added another Domme that would battle Iris for control of Caitlyn in some type of Fuck-off. I’ve read most of your stories, they are entertaining. I can’t wait to read more. Thanks

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Roles

I do love this story don't get me wrong. But personally I think it could be better with every now and then Iris being a sub.

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