All Comments on 'Iron Order - Blood Moon'

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GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86over 1 year ago

I look forward to the next chapter in this interesting story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

very good! i hope theres more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story made me stop for a moment to ponder if I thought bestiality was sexy. Luckily with the conclusion that it is not but that generally I like the way you write reluctance and submission

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I like your style and the story so far. I hope you continue and bring us along for the ride. Thank you.

MainstayMainstay9 months agoAuthor

Thanks for all of the feedback, part two is almost complete and I have a few others scripted out.

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Hi everyone 👋 My name is Melissa and I love writing erotic fiction. Message me if you have any story ideas or want to chat 😋