All Comments on 'Irresistible'

A lovely concept.

A lovely couple.

And decent prose.

I foresee some potential problems, but it's a pretty cool fantasy.

1. If ever they should break up...either she might get involved with a police officer, or every time she sees handcuffs she goes looking for joseph and that could get....awkward.

2. Extension of 1. There really should be a way to remove the trigger...or a rarer, more limited trigger. It works very well in the story, however. Please change nothing.

I loved your story although I never believed in hypnosis until someone I knew who claimed he could not be that weak was hypnotized. He did not have as fantastic an experience as this story tells though. I also wonder what would happen if she got the handcuffs and could not find Joseph as she will be very horny. The hypnotist did not tell her she could relieve her situation with anyone else but in your story, she certainly got two other men quite interested although it did not say she would follow through with them. There is the potential if Joseph is not available that she would find someone else to help her out. lol

It is definitely a different concept than what is usually here.

Thanks for the thoughts gentleone and belgarion. There *is* a way to remove the trigger and that shows up in the next Mandy and Joseph story which, sad to say, isn't done yet. I'll upload it when it is finished. Yes, you are both right, there current situation could be pretty awkward but that sort of thing happens to Mandy and Joseph a lot. Neither one of them ever considers insignificant items like the future, consequences, or managing to hold down a job. :-)