All Comments on 'Is That You, Sarah?'

by SlipLuvver

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shutterpsbshutterpsbabout 10 years ago
well done

Interesting, well executed and quite enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nicely done

Very interesting foreplay ( setting of the story)..... Leading to a dramatic climax ( ending of the story).....also the journey was satisfying.....well done slipluvver....look forward to many more stories like this

harmonyjonesharmonyjonesabout 10 years ago
great story

loved this. the retro setting, the descriptions of the clothing and the sexual acts, and especially the parts about the lamp backlighting the females. well thought out and much appreciated! i think it was sweet that they tidied up for him when they left. a much nicer story than a love 'em and leave 'em scenario.

faving to read again another day. please check out my stories if you have time and leave me some feedback. i'd love to hear some constructive criticism.

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