All Comments on 'Is This a Rollercoaster Ride?'

Sweet, kind. Friends all careful with each other! I love your writing.

Loved it! Two for two, hope to see more!

Your writing is quite special, a little reminiscent of Anaïs Nin. Erotic, descriptive, sensual, and all well balanced and very readable. You used a switch to present tense for the strip, which is difficult to do but you made it work effectively. Both your stories are really good and I’m looking forward to the next.

I really like this story. Gentle, loving and sensual. Your use of language is erotic without being harsh or coarse and that’s a difficult trick to pull. And I liked the story - arousing but plausible too (which is always a plus in my book).

I am wont to skip over some words, even sentences as I rush to the climax. This time I read every word, every sentence. I wanted to experience the arousal that a good strip tease would elicit. It was good... I hope that they enjoy one another again.

I loved your story. I could see Mia..and can only imagine how wonderful I would feel if someone were to strip just for me. Great job?

Great story. Could see Jackson and Mia going behind Claire’s back. Mia really needs Jackson to finish in her.