by Bamo68
The story just gets better and better. You have an incredible ability to draw the reader in and I can't wait for the next chapter/chapters.
Could you have left it on a bigger cliff? Bloody hell! Great writing as usual…. I’m loving all your stories and now the crossovers! Keep them coming. I’d say you’ve got a great book ready to be published with merging Isabel & Mac.
Please post faster. You write fantastic stories. Everyone got 5 stars and are marked as favorite.
Enjoying the story.
There are somewhat regular mistakes with names that disrupt the flow of the story. Please ask your editors to keep an eye out for these types of mistakes.
Thanks for your time writing and sharing your world.
Brilliant. My second time reading this already. Hope to see more chapters soon.
Brilliant work.. excellent story and what a way to leave us hanging.. thank you.
I'm really looking forward to seeing how deeply enmeshed in the American justice system you (and the British characters ) will get as we continue these story arcs. I truly enjoy your stories and the crossovers are a nice addition.
I am very impressed with the story so far. But there is one major mistake you made.
Regarding Jay's graduation.
•It is done in Latin
•An official from the college (a provost i believe) brings the graduates forward four at a time with each one grabbing a finger of the officials right hand.
•Each graduate individually comes forward, places their folded hands into the hands of the head of the university, and they recieve their degree verbally.
•There are no diplomas at the ceremony. Graduates receive them in the mail.
Brilliant. I keep checking for more hope you can find time for much more to this story.
Excellent, but what happens to Uncle Calvin, OR is that yet to come in later chapters?