All Comments on 'Isabel'

THis is only a start of a story. Either expand to a full short story or don't bother. Well written, so far, but woefully incomplete. You have laid the foundation for dramatic conflict, but only the foundation. I invite you to continue, but only if you are going to do it in depth.

But only if you write longer chapters. Great start but not enough to hook one into reading more without deeper development.

You damn well better!

Growing up I can recall my mother referring to movie previews as "teasers." I hope you've got this story written, in your head if not yet on paper or a keyboard, because you've delivered a great teaser. Now you've got to deliver the goods. On with the show!

love how you introduce conflict throughout your stories... pls do run down this path, looking forward to it :-)

For story to be meaningful, husband's boss should be woman. Or now the wife of Boss can be invited to have Isabel and may be Brent as she must be already ignored by Chaze.