by Cyberdiva68
This chapter definitely shows promise. Looking forward to the punishments!
...and just think -- so much more great reading to cum...great pace, interesting characters, descriptive without boring detail...gee -- what more can a reader ask for. Thanks! hcl (and oh yeah, so nice to see you can spell as an extra bonus).
Besides the fact that it’s a utterly bizarre concept with no bearing in reality why is this listed as BDSM?? Ever heard of Safe, Sane and CONSENSUAL? Abduction, abuse and rape thinly disguised as police procedures?? Come on.
Didn’t bother finishing this, I enjoy BDSM, I enjoy vanilla sex too. When I read a fictional story it needs elements of reality to make it relatable. It might have been better to try blackmail in this Non Consensual story which I assume will rapidly move onto Reluctance and eventually to BDSM. I you only want to write about sex then by all means write about it don’t try slapping on a flimsy plot it’s insulting.