All Comments on 'Island Vacation Ch. 03'

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fayspgfayspg11 months ago

Love the story line! Please keep it going!

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog10 months ago

Very simulating slow build. Absolutely erotic. Not much has happened in terms of real action and I'm already breathing hard. Reading on like one of those books, as they say, you can't put down. 5 stars

BridgekickerBridgekicker10 months ago

Great transition and introduction of the idea. I love your writing.

NekidinazNekidinaz10 months ago

I agree with Hotdiggitydog...absolutely erotic and not at all unbelievable...in fact, it is so real sounding that I'm finding my own self breathing hard too :)

cynsharercynsharer5 months ago

So well written and paced. Cyn agrees that it is very believable and erotic. She predicts good things for Jen! ;)

limeyxxlimeyxx3 months ago

Yup. Definitely going to binge this one. One of my favorite scenarios :)

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