All Comments on 'Island Vacation Ch. 11'

ANOTHER OUTSTANDING CHAPTER! Keep them cumming.

love the journey

Mmmm, moving from exhibitionist to loving wife. I'm glad it took 11 chapters for Jen to give a guy(not her husband) a blowjob.

Too often on here, it only takes 11 paragraphs. Thanks for your sense of anticipation. Can't wait for 12 and beyond!

5 stars are few ... keep it up

Not a good idea to change the category from Exhibitionist to LW: in this category, the fetish-cuck fantasies are very much disliked (with a very few exceptions).

Not sure why, after 10 chapters, you decided to take a shit in Loving Wives. It takes more than including a wife in the action to belong in this category. I bet you would get better marks and comments if you put your group sex story in Group Sex instead...

Love the tease and beginning payoff. Also love where this seems to be headed. More please. MUCH MORE! Please?

A really bad drop in the readers evaluation, just changing the category: 10 chapters in the Exhib category with 4.6+ stars (!!!) and, at the moment, a mere 3.2-3.4* with this 11th part in the LW category. Why this illogical move, knowing that in the LW category the fetish-cuck tales are very much disliked ?

This story should be nominated to Pulitzer Prize. Keep writing and thank you that you publish every few days.

It was a well appreciated tale, with an average rating of 4.6*, until it came in this LW category, badly dropping down to a mere 3.4*. Why doing that, after 10 chapters in another category ?

Pulitzer Prize for horseshit? Sure.

Unless this is a pay-per-view category, there is no reason to kill this serie moving it here from a really well appreciated different category. What's the gain, losing so much in the readers rating ?

Love the story and the anticipation of what happens next. Hopefully, the journey continues.

Very well written. This story has been heading here for the last several chapters, so anyone who is surprised hasn't been paying attention. Don't let those who review-bombed your story get to you. It's actually their kink to do it. They read every single story in LW, just so they can tell you how much they hated it- for the most part anonymously. Notice that your 'mere 3.4 rating' has already climbed to 3.8+ as you get more reads. I hope this story continues, I've enjoyed reading it.

"StagandVixen13: ... They read every single story in LW, just so they can tell you how much they hated it- for the most part anonymously. Notice that your 'mere 3.4 rating' has already climbed to 3.8+"

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The fetish-cuck tales in this LW category almost never reach even the 4*, and mostly stay in the low rating range of 2.5-3.5*. That's why the bad drop from the regular average 4.7* of the first 10 parts to the 3.8* of this 11th part (why this suddenly change ?). About "They read every single story in LW" it's simply not true, most readers do NOT read the fetish-cuck tales in this category, they quickly skim, read the tags and go to the rating, no need to read the tale (and there is NOT hating at all). About the evil "anonymously", every user is anonymous in this platform, since a nickname is not a verified identity, and every user (reader or author) can have multiple identities, nicknamed or anonymous. It's a fact that the vast majority of the LW readers dislike very much these fetish-cuck tales, so why the change from the exhibit cat (after 10 parts with a very good rating) to this LW, getting inevitably the bad drop ?

There is a chance that the writer doesn’t care about arbitrary numbers and just wants to tail a story. Keep up the excellent work and write the way, you want to write.