All Comments on 'Isolated Property - Bonus Scene 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So glad you returned to Avery’s story! Part of me wants some character development for Harrison but he is also so believable and hot the way he is. Time to re-read every part again…

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is so twisted but really unique. I hope there is more as we see this dark dynamic evolve. So much potential still!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Goddamn, you're alive. It's been so long I thought you'd stopped writing or something horrible got ya. Welcome back and thanks for posting.

With every new way he comes up with to condition her I don't know how she is going to get away from him. He sees everything. Perhaps one day she'll uncover the gun and shoot him in his sleep after convincing him for years that she's given up. -lilmeow

MissedLifeMissedLifeover 2 years ago

Was so happy to see a new chapter. Having read your update I am sad this is over for now. Hands down one of the best if not the best stories ever. Your writing is absolutely outstanding. If your skills as a doctor are as good as your writing skills then your patients are extremely lucky. I do hope that someday as the kids get older and life provides a few minutes of free time you will again thrill your readers with new stories and updates to old. Avery is such a captivating character and I will continue hold deep in my mind the hope that in the end she survives. But in the meantime it has been one hellva ride. Take care and stay healthy. I will be waiting patiently for more stories from you.

LaRascasseLaRascasseover 2 years ago

Welcome back! I loved the story, as dark as it was. You really show the helplessness of the situation for Avery, but her resolve to not give in shine through. Harrison is also made thoroughly repulsive and I will be glad when he finally gets his eventual come-uppance. 5 star effort

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

oh god you are a genius at bonding scenarios

my heart broke when he said there is future for poor avery

this bastard is so manipulative he is destroying all her hope her will to save herself from him but he will get tired of her eventually at some point of time he isnt planning for happily ever after is he ?

howcome no one is coming for avery

also lately he has completely stopped using anal lube and taking her on dry anal pounding (i thought it was just a one time anal punishment but no) he is making her asshole used to no lube transforming her into painal slave though he never uses verbal degradation

still the anal on pulley rocking chair when he told her that she has bought house on his own property and there is no escape was the best,hottest and scariest

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

harrison is one of the strongest craziest manipulative villian

and avery is the strongest noncon fem protagonist

its like light vs dark good vs evil

god vs satan

please please dont let avery lose at the end harrison must suffer at all cost

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This guy needs a knife to the dick.

Although, it's hard to muster any respect for Avery at this point either. All she is, is a clit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow. This story is everything, it makes me nauseous but Harrison is hot and I hate him, but I also don’t want him to die. Jesus, please continue. I’d like for Harrison to threaten her with pregnancy as well!

sotarosotaroover 1 year ago

Stellar, Mr. Avery. Your genius is greatly appreciated.

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