All Comments on 'Isolated Property - Bonus Scene 04'

Another spectacular installment. This part is lighter on the physical, but really goes to 11 with the psychological horror. The remembrances and flashbacks work to show the true scale to which Avery has been victimized over the years. Love it. 5 stars as ever.

It must be Christmas. Two chapters in as many days. Please tell me you have more written ?

This story is so riveting and could have several endings. One possible outcome would be her friend who found her the property could grow some balls and report her missing to the authorities, who in turn would investigate the whole situation and be able to catch asshole and rescue Avery. Unfortunately the amount of damage already done to her physical and mental personas may be insurmountable by that time. The best outcome would be for her to kill him when an opportunity arises but that may take a longer time than she has. The scary thing is there are actually people like this amongst us...think Cleveland; 3 girls...10 years in captivity...right under the noses of family and neighbors! Thanks Doc.🔥🔥🔥

And now we have more of an insight. You are an excellent writer, sensing that the story needed some deeper content now. I hope you finish this.

I am amazed that Avery has any of her wits left after 8(?) months of relentless manipulation and rape. At this point I can't see any way out for her other than outside intervention. Harrison is simply too well trained, experienced and methodical in how he handles Avery's movements to expect any opportunity to escape. We know you are embarking on a new career but I do hope you can find a bit of time to help this poor woman out.

Wonderful writing about a scary as fuck scene. Too real! You are a blessing.