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OneMoreStoryPleaseOneMoreStoryPlease7 months ago

Very good. Some suggestions: Third person narration would work better. Also, why is the woman saying "I licked my Master's feet"? There is no reason for her to refer to this man as her Master, in her own mind. This is another reason why third person narration is better. For example, the woman licked her main captor's feet. Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Loved it, please give us more!

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