All Comments on 'It Just Feels Right Ch. 05'

by Kinkybutcute2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wonderful!

Oh My God, thank you for this chapter. Amazing. Your story is really one of the best on this website. I Love it. please write more. thank you very much!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Great story. Great smut. Really one of the best stories I’ve read here!

g00dgirlg00dgirlover 4 years ago
I need more

I love your story.... I'm waiting for more. Thank you!

g00dgirlg00dgirlover 4 years ago
I'm waiting

I need to know what happens next. Please please continue your excellent story. Thank you so much!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
wow!

Amazing story! you write sooo well. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Where are you?

Please come back :-( Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The most amazing

Please continue this story! It speaks to me on so many different levels. Please~

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fantastic!

This was a fabulous story and I sincerely hope you will continue it!

g00dgirlg00dgirlover 4 years ago
Please Please come back

I'm checking your profile everyday... waiting for more... please come back

PlainJane50PlainJane50over 4 years ago
Please come back

I love your writing style. You paint such a detailed picture. I can feel Mike and Shelly's passion for each other. I need the fantasy of a happily ever after. Thank you for sharing your story and giving me a respite from reality.

ChrisTheCrookChrisTheCrookover 4 years ago
A beautiful tale

I had a wonderful time reading your story.

Even though everything happened so fast they really seem to fit together very well. I hope you'll find the time and inspiration to let us know more about Mike and Michelle's life together.

-C

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Best story!

This story is just great and deserves a follow up PLEASE!!! Excellent writing👍

IslaRoyIslaRoyover 3 years ago
An Outstanding Read!

What an outstanding story! The plot, the character development, the intense eroticism - all coalesce to make this an intoxicating read. You are a talented wordsmith. But there’s more. You provide Shelly with so much emotional depth. I’m in love with her! I appreciate that this caliber of writing requires time, and no small amount of dedication. Clearly demanding. Now, however, after titillating us with this one outstanding piece of work, hopefully, you will not leave your audience in a literary limbo for too much longer. Please, more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This story is just great and deserves a follow up PLEASE!!! Excellent writing👍

nannabanananannabananaalmost 3 years ago

I stayed up all night reading this, it's so good! I hope you continue the story, we must know what happens next 🤩

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent read. Happens to be one of my favourite stories now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This deserves a follow up! Good writing!👍👍👍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am absolutely heartbroken that this is not complete. Foreshadowing makes me think that Michelle’s new job is with Mike’s company, which they will discover at Tuesday’s meet and greet with the new hires. More than two years since this was posted, so I guess we’ll never know. Bummer.

sweetprince55sweetprince552 months ago

I’m depressed as fuck that there’s no more of this to read

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