by Kinkybutcute2
Oh My God, thank you for this chapter. Amazing. Your story is really one of the best on this website. I Love it. please write more. thank you very much!!!!
I need to know what happens next. Please please continue your excellent story. Thank you so much!!!
Please continue this story! It speaks to me on so many different levels. Please~
This was a fabulous story and I sincerely hope you will continue it!
I'm checking your profile everyday... waiting for more... please come back
I love your writing style. You paint such a detailed picture. I can feel Mike and Shelly's passion for each other. I need the fantasy of a happily ever after. Thank you for sharing your story and giving me a respite from reality.
I had a wonderful time reading your story.
Even though everything happened so fast they really seem to fit together very well. I hope you'll find the time and inspiration to let us know more about Mike and Michelle's life together.
-C
This story is just great and deserves a follow up PLEASE!!! Excellent writing👍
What an outstanding story! The plot, the character development, the intense eroticism - all coalesce to make this an intoxicating read. You are a talented wordsmith. But there’s more. You provide Shelly with so much emotional depth. I’m in love with her! I appreciate that this caliber of writing requires time, and no small amount of dedication. Clearly demanding. Now, however, after titillating us with this one outstanding piece of work, hopefully, you will not leave your audience in a literary limbo for too much longer. Please, more!
This story is just great and deserves a follow up PLEASE!!! Excellent writing👍
I stayed up all night reading this, it's so good! I hope you continue the story, we must know what happens next 🤩
I am absolutely heartbroken that this is not complete. Foreshadowing makes me think that Michelle’s new job is with Mike’s company, which they will discover at Tuesday’s meet and greet with the new hires. More than two years since this was posted, so I guess we’ll never know. Bummer.