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GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetroniusalmost 2 years ago

Thoughtful and intense. But you need the help of a capable editor. Typos, and verb forms, yes, but most especially punctuation. Punctuation is your friend; call on your friend more frequently.

DavBooDavBooalmost 2 years ago

Awesome as always Jayne.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Further please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

An open marriage. This makes for a boring story. No conflict.

EkphrasisEkphrasisabout 2 months ago

Jayne, a lovely story beautifully written, and as sexy as all get out. 5 from me. Jeanne xx

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