All Comments on 'It's Complicated Ch. 10'

I LOVED IT!! Ok now you are doing it!!! I jus can't understand why Waylon is sooo mad its not like she his woman!! More please real soon!!!

okay now it all comes together and I love it....keep the updates coming...

I love the direction this is going in. I think Pierce has been paying Ryan to keep up with Lyn which is going to probably piss her off when she finds out. I'll keep checking back for updates.

im still trying to figure out whats up with Ry, and Waylon lol i thought he was a big boy throwing hissy fits...love it waiting for more. TY

is that he's gettin paid off by cohen to keep an eye on Lynn, oh how the wicked web weaves lol, don't let cohen be the hero in this please!!!!!!!!!! let it be waylon, he seems like one cool dude who is hot for lyn, and let lyn get over cohen quick smart, that prick deserves to be all torn up and alone, hahaha!! lynn needs to realise waylon is for her lol, i'm so into this story, as u may well notice, thanx for a quick update and a 2 chapters yay!! :))

a bad girl, throwing in more spanners and stirring up more tension. - Totally loved it, hehe! - My vote goes to Waylon, but I'm afraid I know who will luck out in the end, although I still don't like the prick. - Great chapter, thanks again!

I just can't wait for the whole story to be completed. This is definitively a story that I will read again from beginning to end. Can't wait to send what your next story about, hope it interracial too...

Damn! Just how many guys fall for Lyn? And yet she continues to keep her heart for Cohen. Go figure!! In a sense I could see why they had to go their separate ways. Their relationship went from a shared kinship based on hurt and disappointment to a lifelong friendship to an increasingly unhealthy obsession. Unfortunately, time and distance haven't made them whole human beings. Their long overdue reunion will not be a good one either. Yeah, Pierce was paying Ryan to keep tabs on Lyn (which was cheating since she wasn't doing the same for him. He set the rules and left her. Then he broke his own rules, by the way.)I'm not sure Pierce knew that the young hot author his publishing company was about to represent was Lyn, though, until he read the maniscript and recognized their story. Try convincing Lyn that the past three years of her life, including her upcoming success weren't all well-crafted manipulations by Pierce and gang. I can't wait to read chapter 11 and 12 and... Great story!!! ~Bluegardenia

ok i still like your writing but i mean come on wat the fuck is up the lyn? im trying to be sympathetic for her but seriously...she's just a tramp with way to many emotional problems. i mean she said she didn't wana be like all the other girls price has fucked but she failed miserably. and price? dude grow up and grow some balls, he has become more like the antoganist in this story than anything else and i really think he's being to much of stalkerish. lyn shouldn't even be with him in the first place, he even admitted he didn't want anything with anyone hes just getting STDs from girls. both of them seriously need to commit suicide form all the psychological shit they have.

I'm completely loving this story! The way it's all comimg together... yes!

Keep 'em coming!! I want my own Cohen.

You gotta love Johnny, he's my favorite character