All Comments on 'It's Just Magic Pt. 06-07'

Thr story is very good,

but there are far too many typos and gramnatical errors.

I suggest you get someone to proofread.

5 stars.

A slight preference for less anal.

I disagree with the person who said less anal , put it in if you wish, some people like it just as much as other don’t like it

Why isn't he staying the night? Celine has her own bedroom, no reason he cannot just sleep alone.