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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Really hot story but spoilt by many typos and syntax errors. Either check it carefully yurself or find yourself a good editor. Even so, avery good effortand I look forward to reading more of your work

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Writing stories for the love of my life but no story or no words could actually say how sexy she is to me! She is amazing!