All Comments on 'Ivy League at Any Cost Pt. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Go Vicki! Turn the tables!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I hope she gets the proof one day but not before she see a lot more humiliation from the hands of Liz. I feel sorry for Janette , I think Liz should make Vicki service her every morning and every night without vic getting anything in return. I love how she is ready to pull her pants down when told, she needs more of that as well as spankings. thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Pappasleaze!

EroticCupcakeEroticCupcakeabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment! I'm not 100% sure why I'm writing this. The fact that you care enough to comment is pretty cool.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The story is good. Can you please add some piss in mouth and ass to mouth

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

more cruel events for either vicki or liz...just make it a cruel story, it's a wonderful one. lets have liz being licked to satisfying orgasms. Add some cruelty

EroticCupcakeEroticCupcakeabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment. The intention was always to make this story dark. One reason it takes so long to write is the more I feel like I know the characters, the less I want to torture them. I also think that, in retrospect, the first chapter was not super dark, so I should have done more to show the tone immediately. That being said, all comments are appreciated. I'll try to finish the story according to the initial plan, and future projects may take some lessons learned with them.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Poor Vicki. This story is dark but hot. I'd love to see Vicki get hope that she can find a way out, the find out what her sister did to Liz just in time to have her hope dashed so that she can suffer a similar fate to Liz. I guess I'm pretty sadistic but it's what keeps me coming back. <3

EroticCupcakeEroticCupcake10 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment. There are elements of that idea coming.

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