All Comments on 'Ivy's First Guest'

Great for a first post! Well done. Keep it up! Thank you.

Wow , I’m impressed, for a first story you certainly did a remarkable job! Your storyline , character development, sentence structure and enough of an open ending to carry on more chapters. The only thing I had trouble with was believing this was your first story , lol 5 star worthy

pretty good on your first story!

looking forward to reading more of your works!