All Comments on 'Izzy Has a List'

by NotWise

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IJS0904IJS0904almost 3 years ago

Well done. Very well done.

lovemesomephillylovemesomephillyalmost 3 years ago

Some about this felt....off. Like I didn't feel a flow from the story and it felt disjointed.

OmenainenOmenainenalmost 3 years ago

Neat writing, hot sex, maybe as much or more E&V than Group? Plenty of orgasms all around and even a happy ending! Yet I was left wanting for something. More feelings, perhaps? Everyone seemed to be so ok with everything that happened it all felt a little meaningless.

Anyway, nice story and the best of luck with the competition!

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I'm a soon-to-be-retired planning consultant living in the US southwest. For those wondering about my "Unlikely Angels" story, Thank you for reading, voting and commenting on the story. I'm glad that many of you enjoyed it, but I removed it from Literotica after I made the "b...