All Comments on 'Jack and Dianne'

by B_Bailey

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prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 6 years ago
Hmmm

Very poignant reality of life in the last two sentences.

prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 6 years ago
Jack and Dianne

meant to add I thought this story was going to be about to 'American kids grown up in the heartland' football star and debutante. lol

B_BaileyB_Baileyabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the imput.

It seems the folks that own the website frown upon adolescent sexual stories. Otherwise it might have followed the song lines a little closer. And thanks for your feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
boring and verbose

sorry I found it boring and way too wordy (verbose)

SandyBeechumSandyBeechum25 days ago

Loyal sons forever true. :) I thought adding "Jantz" in the story was classic. If you know, you know.

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