All Comments on 'Jack and The Fat Man Pt. 04'

This episode entirely lived up to the promise of the first three. Arnold is clearly comfortable with his dominance, but he is not abusive with it. He knows this quality is something Jack wants and needs from him, but he seems to view it more as a responsibility to his young protégé than a title of ownership. I look forward to more of your story.

I'm rating this at 5 stars; something I rarely do.

@bhart1 Thanks for the comments and positive feedback. It’s very much appreciated

Made an account just to say how much I'm loving this story and I'm really looking forward to it you do more.

Personally hope Arnolds size comes into play a bit more but I'm sure whatever you choose to do will be excellent <3

@OutrageousQuail. Thank you so much for making the effort to create an account and for the positive feedback,