Jack Masters, PI - The Betrayal

Meh. Personally should have left it at the first story. This got really weird. Also the whole setup at the end had zero value. Just get a video if Amy and Richie screwing. Besides what brother does that another? If so then it woukd get highly physical. And bloody. That is a bigger betrayal in some ways than the wife. Amy suddenly became some caricature of a sex crazed nut job. Whatever.

Not bad. Entertaining and fairly well written.

Nope, this was fucked up all the way through, made no sense even in an entertainment perspective. Just plain dumb. No rationale and the sex scenes lacked erotica because it was so fake and dumb. Come on........ a little more effort and reasonable effort. Good griefous...........

What a weird story. The revenge made little sense. They could.have easily got evidence of adultery and which few states let adultery impact a no fault divorce? Not many. Not sure why all the effort. Amy was banging his brother for a year. So big whoop he and Gail end up divorcing their spouses! Huzzah! Wow all that efgort for what? And Richie's motivation camee off as dumb. Gail was a moron. And we have no idea why Amy did anything beyond some fetish to peg Richie. Whatever. Meanwhile Gail has pined for the MC for years but when they get together, they both realize no long term future. Sure but wouldn't it take a while for Gail to admit that after years of yearning? Again a trainwreck. The faked swap was anticlimactic. And what is with Amy and Richie getting together in an open relationship while Amy was trying to reconcile with the MC? And weren't their kids? What happened to them? Doesn't sound like Amy had custody. So we're they out of the house. Did they learn about any of this? Meh.

Enjoyed. Why do people take everything so serious. This fiction, If you dont like it do better and submit your own. Otherwise get a life.