All Comments on 'Jackie Comes to Stay Pt. 02'

Sexy tale, I hope Lena is pregnant and they somehow get back together.

There will definitely be MORE chapters to this story...I hope....Please don't leave us (me, in particular :-) ) hanging in suspense...really enjoying it so far!

Lame ending...seperate houses?

You mean what did I think about the beginning of the story? Where is the middle and the end? You can't leave it like it is.

Good start !!!

The end would have been better if they stayed together as a husband and wife and daughter