All Comments on 'Jackie's Rules Pt. 08'

Did you write this on a mobile with auto-correct!?

So many typos and small errors I gave up trying to follow the story and ended up just looking for the mistakes.

"of" instead of "if"...

"he" vs "she"...

"is" vs "in"...

"swaring" vs "starting"...

"Do on Jackie's foot..." vs.. I don't know what that's meant to be

Such a shame as I quite like this story.

Love this story!

Love the story but this chapter needs an edit.

Another good chapter. Not sure of the ending of it though, does Alice want Jackie to be caught nude in the hallway? I believe that would take away some of the fun of possibly getting caught. i would like a reminder of the rules if that isn't to much to ask for in an upcoming chapter. Yes there was some typos but I guess I am either intelligent enough or simple minded enough that I knew what was being said, did not distract me at all. Thanks for sharing hope next chapter will be pretty soon.

Pappasleaze!

I enjoyed this entire story. Particularly I liked the little touches you add, like being barefoot to enter the apartment if Jackie was not wearing panties. Please give some thought to making Alice’s marking on Jackie’s right buttock a permanent tattoo. MissR

Love the story Cant wait for next chapter

5 stars.. keep more risky

Love your work can't wait for new rules added. Maybe a bathroom rule could be fun. Would love it if she was to grow her arm pit hair, think it could add to the no shower thing and keep her more filthy.

Excellent! Starting to get a little more risky and intense. Loved the pigtails and tennis practice