by seansmom13
This is a great story I loved it, please write a sequel I would love to read it.
Great story and you're right it deserves a continuation. Keep writing, you're good at it and can only get better over time. Good luck.
amazing. I came after reading it and loved when Jack forced her to swallow all of hs cum. awesome story. Hope to read more about these two.
I've decided to work on a second part to this story. Hopefully it will be finished and submitted by the end of the week.
Well written D/s story and a truly believable scenario! I've been in Jack's situation a couple of times, "convincing" my girl friend to do what she wanted to do all along but just on the verge of date rape.
I made Jan suck my dick one night after a lot of cock teasing. It was her first time and she feigned being pissed off at me because I made her swallow a gallon of my warm, sticky semen...LOL. After that, she became my self-declared "sex toy" and we had a fabulous relationship for a year until she moved away!!
This is a great little short. Well written and not ungodly long. Hope that Jack and Sophie have some more Sub/Dom fun!
I thought of making everything happen in a public restroom or something like that, but felt like it would be more unnerving and unsettling in Sophie's own room. Thank you for the comment!
I would love to read more about the two of them, maybe him taking her after one of their classes on the side of a building or in a bathroom. just saying good work