All Comments on 'Jack's Nude Scholarship Ch. 03'

by Croodle

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birobotboybirobotboy11 months ago

Woo! More chapters of my favorite new stories on here, can't wait to read more!

D_O_LondonerD_O_Londoner11 months ago

Brilliant, really enjoying these fun stories. Can’t wait for many more episodes from both characters. I guess both male & female will run and run to give us weeks of erotic enjoyment.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I want MORE!!! This series is too good. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hahahahahaha!!

Expectation: "Wow you are brave to go ahead with this human sexuality project, good luck!"

If it was real: "The fuck am I going to believe that! You're a pervert!" That would be that mother's reaction IRL hahahah

Keep ongoing, please!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hilarious

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I'm loving this series. Please, carry on.

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel8911 months ago

I have to say, this is way better than I expected. It's the tone that you really nail. You keep the tone lighthearted without going into full slapstick B-movie, with an irreverent wit to the dialogue and narration. While I'd prefer more description to enhance the "nude vs clothed" interactions (if I can better picture the clothed person, the more nude Jack feels in my head), the way you delve into Jack's emotions and sensations really enforces why I love exposure erotica. The cast is enjoyable so far and I'm eager to see if Jack gets a CFNM love interest. It was also wonderful to see some enbie representation with Aster. <3

CroodleCroodle11 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the support everyone! I appreciate all the positive comments I’m getting. It’s really unexpected!

My life has become a bit busier since I dropped the initial batch of chapters, but I’m still committed to keeping both Jack and Tracy’s stories going, even if it’s at a slower pace.

But don’t worry, Jack’s next Chapter should be coming pretty soon! The next two will be pretty exciting!

centauri4centauri48 months ago

Well, since the job of Fiction is to take {something} from imagination and give it SOME kind of realism, I think this does that quite well. Capturing the "unreality" of Jack's disbelief and skepticism as it rapidly morphs into "belief" and takes on an air of confidence, is great. He does it, he "forces" it into his new reality and basically goes "All in" with his attitude, without deeply worrying it was an "impossible task", oh no! He embraces it and even the part about explaining his nudity to a pair of incidental characters, another student's parents who happened to be there to witness Jack's crucial crossroads. I enjoyed it and hope the remaining chapters continue explaining his inner turmoil this same way! ~ Maybe have even been through SOME of these EXACT feelings myself in the last 30 years! (that's all I can say...)

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