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Click hereJess? Well, I'm not sure what she's up to. I heard through the grapevine that a few of the hockey wives and girlfriends kidnapped her for a fun "girls' weekend away" when they found out what happened. I have no knowledge of what transpired, but rumor has it, Jess was on the receiving end of a not so fun sex filled weekend. I guess she didn't see that one coming, but apparently hockey women are just as loyal as hockey men! It seems her best pal Trisha and a trusty strap on were the ringleaders.
Chuck the Fuck? It seems Dr. Fielding, the school principal must have come from a hockey family because she made Chuck's work life as miserable as possible. His teaching contract was not renewed, and he left the state. His wife took him to the cleaners in the divorce and I hear his kids won't talk to him. Interestingly, she became friends with Trisha and has been attending some hockey games!
Before Chuck the Fuck left town, he fell down a flight of stairs coming out of his dingy apartment in downtown Denver. He broke three ribs, his right arm and lost four of his front teeth. All my hockey buddies were at O'Connell's when it happened, or so said about twenty witnesses!
Well... fuck me, maybe Bob Segar wasn't right!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 days agoStick to either first person or third person author. Going from "Jess was planning" and abruptly switching to "I was sitting at the table when she came in" is awful. Get an editor.
Calico75about 1 month agoSuch an excellent writer. Very few errors, great characterizations and plot development, and great stories!
Oatmeal1969about 1 month agoThat was very very enoyable. LIked all the characters, even Jess and her flaws.
you did a good job with this.
"I swear Thomas, I have no interest in him, it was an idiotic fling on my part. I have no excuse, but you can't throw our marriage away over this. We are meant to be together!"
"The fact it means nothing makes your betrayal more disrespectful and frankly, sad. I'm not throwing our marriage away over this, you are... and over something that you claim was meaningless. Do you understand how pathetic that makes you? I'm merely retaining my last shred of dignity by letting go of you.
What you did was selfish and ignorant and I don't know how you'll ever find happiness... thankfully that's no longer my problem.
You may be beautiful, but like my grandfather said, you are ugly to the bone. Good bye Jess."
Anonymous2 months agoI never do this, but this story was so well done that I felt I should write what I was feeling. I felt I knew the character I felt I knew what he felt, there is more but that is enough. Is that not what a author is trying to do? Well done, do more!!
Anonymous3 months agoMaybe that's how you do things in CO, but here in CA we post-game in the parking lot (and the locker room), and take turns bringing the beer. But you got the eau-de-hockey-bag just about right, even though most of us spray our gear with Lysol after every game. Otherwise, I loved how you presented the hockey theme.
Anonymous4 months ago5 stars, but not a fan of the ex-wife's "girls' weekend away". Rape is bad, whoever it is, and that's what you make it sound like. Good story, but you should find an editor. Keep writing.
Anonymous6 months agoA good story but I never felt a connection with her so I never had a gut wrenching experience when she decided to cheat. Just a bitch with no morals.
5 stars anyway.
Bill S.
Anonymous6 months agoCounterpoint:
Hey, hey, hey, hey
If you want to be happy for the rest of your life
Never make a pretty woman your wife
So for my personal point of view
Get an ugly girl to marry you
If you want to be happy for the rest of your life
Never make a pretty woman your wife
So for my personal point of view
Get an ugly girl to marry you
A pretty woman makes her husband look small
And very often causes his downfall
As soon as he married her and then she starts
To do the things that will break his heart
But if you make an ugly woman your wife
Ah you'll be happy for the rest of your life
An ugly woman cooks meals on time
She'll always give you peace of mind
If you want to be happy for the rest of your life
Never make a pretty woman your wife
So for my personal point of view
Get an ugly girl to marry you
Don't let your friends say you have no taste
Go ahead and marry anyway
Though her face is ugly, her eyes don't match
Take it from me, she's a better catch
If you want to be happy for the rest of your life
Never make a pretty woman your wife
So for my personal point of view
Get an ugly girl to marry you
Say man! Hey baby!
I saw your wife the other day!
Yeah? Yeah, an' she's ugly!
Yeah, she's ugly, but she sure can cook, baby!
Yeah, alright!
If you want to be happy for the rest of your life
Never make a pretty woman your wife
So for my personal point of view
Get an ugly girl to marry you
- Jimmy Soul
Songwriters: Carmela T. Guida / Frank Joseph Guida / Joseph F. Royster
Anonymous8 months agoThe hockey wives’ retribution at the end was ridiculous. They basically raped Jess, is that what you’re saying? Nah, dude.
