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Click hereJess? Well, I'm not sure what she's up to. I heard through the grapevine that a few of the hockey wives and girlfriends kidnapped her for a fun "girls' weekend away" when they found out what happened. I have no knowledge of what transpired, but rumor has it, Jess was on the receiving end of a not so fun sex filled weekend. I guess she didn't see that one coming, but apparently hockey women are just as loyal as hockey men! It seems her best pal Trisha and a trusty strap on were the ringleaders.
Chuck the Fuck? It seems Dr. Fielding, the school principal must have come from a hockey family because she made Chuck's work life as miserable as possible. His teaching contract was not renewed, and he left the state. His wife took him to the cleaners in the divorce and I hear his kids won't talk to him. Interestingly, she became friends with Trisha and has been attending some hockey games!
Before Chuck the Fuck left town, he fell down a flight of stairs coming out of his dingy apartment in downtown Denver. He broke three ribs, his right arm and lost four of his front teeth. All my hockey buddies were at O'Connell's when it happened, or so said about twenty witnesses!
Well... fuck me, maybe Bob Segar wasn't right!
Such an excellent writer. Very few errors, great characterizations and plot development, and great stories!
That was very very enoyable. LIked all the characters, even Jess and her flaws.
you did a good job with this.
"I swear Thomas, I have no interest in him, it was an idiotic fling on my part. I have no excuse, but you can't throw our marriage away over this. We are meant to be together!"
"The fact it means nothing makes your betrayal more disrespectful and frankly, sad. I'm not throwing our marriage away over this, you are... and over something that you claim was meaningless. Do you understand how pathetic that makes you? I'm merely retaining my last shred of dignity by letting go of you.
What you did was selfish and ignorant and I don't know how you'll ever find happiness... thankfully that's no longer my problem.
You may be beautiful, but like my grandfather said, you are ugly to the bone. Good bye Jess."
I never do this, but this story was so well done that I felt I should write what I was feeling. I felt I knew the character I felt I knew what he felt, there is more but that is enough. Is that not what a author is trying to do? Well done, do more!!
Maybe that's how you do things in CO, but here in CA we post-game in the parking lot (and the locker room), and take turns bringing the beer. But you got the eau-de-hockey-bag just about right, even though most of us spray our gear with Lysol after every game. Otherwise, I loved how you presented the hockey theme.
5 stars, but not a fan of the ex-wife's "girls' weekend away". Rape is bad, whoever it is, and that's what you make it sound like. Good story, but you should find an editor. Keep writing.