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SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesarabout 1 year ago

I could forgive the idiosyncratic writing in Part 1 as it seemed done for character effect, but this feels like it was written by a completely different (and much less experienced) author: punctuation and grammar are scattershot, the plot is bouncing off the walls, and a single thought barely lasts a full sentence. Please don't tell me this is AI-generated.

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I'm currently on HRT which I started this year. I have recently posted my first story and hope to continue with it.

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