by Lukenjade
That went waaay too far, it may have been about pushing limits but the ONLY reason that she wasn’t broken is because the author wrote it that way.
- drugged and raped - in her place I’d have left at that point if I hadn’t already called yellow or red
- made to ingest bodily fluids that aren’t safe
- handed off to strangers
- physically tortured and humiliated, as far as they were concerned she’d cheated on her boyfriend so they treated her like shit. Humiliation is ok to a certain point with your partner, in private with people you know is probably more devastating but to add strangers into the mix with people you know too much.
- public exposure
- risking her job by sending her to work smelling of sex in dirty clothes.
The reason I’m reacting strongly is because all of this is completely plausible.
It’s a cliche but seriously don’t try this at home unless you’re trying to end your relationship, in that case it makes you an evil bastard.