All Comments on 'Jaeyern's Sacrifice'

Lol, brilliant. No woman ever wants to leave.

I don't think I'd abandon my girls for sex or extreme pleasure! Or would I?

J x

Whoa! A weirdly cool idea.

You have captured how full of mystery our lives are. As science explains more and more of how life works, giving names and explanations to the functions of our bodies, the actual mysteries of life itself remain. Why are we here? Is there meaning to our existence? What is our purpose? How strong is the compulsion to reproduce? Your story gives a simple formula: "It is pure pleasure. Beyond that, don't question, just let it serve you. Let it please you." Okay -- don't mind if I do. ~~JB

Taking one for the team.

@Yesok1 - she didn’t have an option to stay with her child - it had been decided by others that her life wasn’t important - and it mentions she will be reunited with her in time - Emily

@Rob_Royale - thank you 😊 Emily

@JBEdwards - a lot to fit into 750 words, right? Emily

@djrip - in more way that one 😊 Emily

Nicely done! A touch of horror, erotica, and fantasy all tied up very neatly in a 750 word format.

Love a happy ending. ;)

So imaginative. Great imagery.

@PadTy - thank you 😊 Emily

@Victoria14xs - thank you so much 😊 Emily

No proper ending. Needed some more explanation to what happens now

Em, how do you do this, keep doing it? I am in awe of you

@lc69hunter - thank you 😊 Emily