All Comments on 'Jaime and Mike Pt. 01'

Don't stop writing, as I can identify with your story and can only hope I get the chance to experience something as wonderful in the future.

Great story and start. One minor criticism, in that she’s dressed as Elvira but you hardly mention her tits, which were her best feature.

Wish I could find a boy like you!

Great start and please don’t stop

I love this kind of thing.

I normally like a little bit more romance, but this was a fun read. By the way, you had a few quotes from Airplane in your bio. One of my favorite comedys. Oh stewardess, I speak Jive. And that is when I realized that I had a drinking problem.

Normally like a little more romance but this was a fun read. I recognize some of the quotes in your bio. Some were from Airplane and one was a quote from Robert Opinhimer, head of the Manhattan Project. I am a writer myself.

I normally like a little bit more romance in stories, but this was a fun read. Some of the quotes in your bio were from Airplane and one was from Robert Oppenheimer. I am a writer myself.