by LadyMelodyDarkheart
I normally like a little bit more romance in stories, but this was a fun read. Some of the quotes in your bio were from Airplane and one was from Robert Oppenheimer. I am a writer myself.
Normally like a little more romance but this was a fun read. I recognize some of the quotes in your bio. Some were from Airplane and one was a quote from Robert Opinhimer, head of the Manhattan Project. I am a writer myself.
I normally like a little bit more romance, but this was a fun read. By the way, you had a few quotes from Airplane in your bio. One of my favorite comedys. Oh stewardess, I speak Jive. And that is when I realized that I had a drinking problem.
Great story and start. One minor criticism, in that she’s dressed as Elvira but you hardly mention her tits, which were her best feature.
Don't stop writing, as I can identify with your story and can only hope I get the chance to experience something as wonderful in the future.